Greetings from the Isle of Revival!
Each morning the gulls peck and pull
the wasted corpses of the sea
run to shore. I stand
in my cabana tasting grapes that revive
me, I think of you, of that day, three grapes ago.
I do not wish you were here.
Your absence is my salve.
Greetings from the Port of Penance!
The sand in my shorts scours the deadness away. No wonder
that I have not heard from you. There are no phones
here; your caustic suggestions are landlocked.
Three grapes hence, the silence is reviving. I stand
along the shore to watch the tide. It slips,
I slip, back out into our beginning.
I am thankful for your silence.
Each morning the gulls peck and pull
the wasted corpses of the sea
run to shore. I stand
in my cabana tasting grapes that revive
me, I think of you, of that day, three grapes ago.
I do not wish you were here.
Your absence is my salve.
Greetings from the Port of Penance!
The sand in my shorts scours the deadness away. No wonder
that I have not heard from you. There are no phones
here; your caustic suggestions are landlocked.
Three grapes hence, the silence is reviving. I stand
along the shore to watch the tide. It slips,
I slip, back out into our beginning.
I am thankful for your silence.
I do not send greetings from home
to wasted corpses, pecked and pulled,
skeletons exposed to the sea
ere. I threw the scathing greetings
from paradise, and hope
you ferment there among the crustaceans.
The children are well. Three grapes since
they forgot who you were.
Greetings from the Nile of Renewal!
My skin is now the leather of your satchel, fawn
creased, heavy with spotting. I made marmalade today, grape
like you like. It wasn’t fit
for consumption, the gulls won’t even touch
the stuff, left forever in the sand.
I never think of you.
This place is made for escape
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ReplyDeleteWow, does that ever sound nasty and full of contempt. I could almost hear the hiss of loathing seeping through seemingly "healing" wounds....
ReplyDeleteThat was morbid- me likey!
ReplyDeleteAwesome Cat.
ReplyDeleteWow, nice one Cat! I liked the 3rd stanza best, especially the bit about the 3 grapes.
ReplyDeleteThat closing line of the second stanza... I am thankful for your silence.
ReplyDeleteThat really struck something in me today.
Full of venom. Nice.
ReplyDeleteSuch delicious bitterness.
ReplyDeleteVery cool! Wonderfully visual representations of such specific and ugly emotion. And a nicely clever twist on the usual "wish you were here" motif. I also really like the alliteration of the first lines of the first and last stanzas, well put together and fun to say out loud!
ReplyDeleteI'm sensing a grape theme. Oh, and a bit of anger. Nicely done, my dear.
ReplyDeleteZowie
ReplyDeleteIt would be awesome if you could offer it up at the poetry reading.
ReplyDeleteOr are they all hard ass about no open mic poetry?
Wow. And I mean that in a really good way.
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